Beta needed for Bluebeard.

[attolia]

I hope to have my fairytale challenge fic ready for a beta by sometime tomorrow. The problem is, never having written anything much longer than a drabble, I don't have a beta. For this one I'm mostly looking for grammar and punctuation and the like. I doubt I will have time to any structural rewriting, but I would like to know if/where it is confusing or not working so I can fix it if I get a chance.

The fic will not be much over 1000 words.

Anyone interested?